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Hi Brodie its Quinn how are you? I really like how you used the three points, thoughtful, helpful and positive.How can you improve?
I like your colours that you used in it and the writing in it brodie.and how can you make it better
i think i could in prove with my writing it more.
You must like playing basket ball and you look like you are really good at it and maybe you could put commas in your Ahipara slide really loved your blog it was interesting to look at and read well done.
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ReplyDeleteHi Brodie its Quinn how are you? I really like how you used the three points, thoughtful, helpful and positive.
ReplyDeleteHow can you improve?
I like your colours that you used in it and the writing in it brodie.and how can you make it better
ReplyDeletei think i could in prove with my writing it more.
DeleteYou must like playing basket ball and you look like you are really good at it and maybe you could put commas in your Ahipara slide really loved your blog it was interesting to look at and read well done.
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